Can someone please edit this sentence for a business card – 10 points to first correct helpful answer!?
Ok, I am making a business card and I am trying to write a sentence for the card which is similar to the sentence below…. ( as it is an internet based business I will not have my address, just phone number, name, email and website down the bottom – so this sentence will be the main part of the card in the middle)
Original one of a kind hand crafted jewellery including
salt & fresh water pearls, glass beads, swarovski crystals, wire wrapping, vintage pieces, scrabble tile jewellery, sterling silver & 14kt gold fill, as well as sterling silver mens and womens jewellery from Italy + much more.
To me is seems a bit long, BUT I cant seem to get it any shorter without missing out any vital bits of info.
Can someone please tell me wether words like swarovski crystals should have capitals, if I have commas in the right places and just generally edit or re word it so it is grammatically correct…
THANKS
Original, one-of-a-kind, hand-crafted jewelry. Sale items incl. salt & fresh water pearls, glass beads, Swarovski crystals, Scrabble tile jewelry, sterling silver & 14kt gold fill, as well as men’s & women’s jewelry. Vintage pieces, incl. many from Italy and more..
Vintage Swarovski Aurora Borealis AB Crystal and White Pearl Barrette
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Swarovski Crystal Monogram Cake Topper Vintage Style – Letter M $46.50 Each letter is made from hundreds of sparkling Swarovski crystals with round and marquise diamond shaped crystals. The intricate ajouré design gives it a modern vintage look. 4″ Prongs on bottom to secure on cake and for easy of decorating. Large Letters are 4 3/4″ tall. This listing is for one Large letter M… |
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Large Vintage Style Swarovski Crystal Rhinestone Monogram Cake Topper Any Letter $43.50 … |
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Vintage Swarovski Crystal Double Heart Wedding Cake Topper $43.40 Vintage Swarovski crystal heart cake toppers are an elegant and dazzling way to accessorize your cake with a touch of romance. This Vintage style double cake heart topper features gorgeous sterling silver plated with clear Swarovski Crystals in an intricate ajouré style…. |
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Goddess Black Gold Crystal Leaf 0.25 Vintage Style Headband $18.45 Fabulous fancy handmade black gold tone headband with beaded crystal leaves on side. Vintage and elegant design help you dress up like a modern Goddess. Made with high quality bead crystal and base metal. Great accessory to keep hair in place and create the unique fashion style. A great gift for girls and women of all ages. The band measures 0.25″ wide and 15″ length, the leaf design 1.5″ wide and… |
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Bridal Comb Swarovski Crystal & Rhinestones Silver Hair Comb $46.50 This silver plated floral comb sparkles with beautifully placed clear swarovski crystals and rhinestone encrusted flower outlines. A stunning accessory to your modern wedding. The ornament measures 3-1/2″ wide and 2-3/4″ tall, resting on top of a 2″ comb. Size: 3-1/2″ wide and 2-3/4″ tall… |
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Swarovski Crystal Bridal Headband with Ribbon $65.95 For the latest fashion in wedding headpieces, Mariell presents our beautiful ribbon headband with Swarovski crystals. This striking bridal headband features vintage scrolls accented with marquis crystals and gracefully draping rhinestones measuring 9″ across. The headband has 15 1/2″ of soft satin ribbon on each side finished with beautiful Swarovski teardrop dangles on each end. Our adjustable ri… |
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Creating Glamorous Jewelry with Swarovski Elements: Classic Hollywood Designs with Crystal Beads and Stones $15.24 Creating Glamorous Jewelry with Swarovski Elements presents a collection of modern reproductions of classic Hollywood glitz, worn by the dazzling starlets of the big screen, including Marlene Dietrich, Katherine Hepburn, and Marilyn Monroe. All 20 sparkling jewelry pieces are made with the internationally popular Swarovski products, including the newest items in their line of crystal beads and sto… |
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Rhinestone Jewelry: A Price and Identification Guide $18.00 - Features more than 400 full-color photos- Identifies and prices the most desirable rhinestone pieces- Offers historical overview of rhinestone jewelry… |
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Alpen 15-45×60 w/45 deg. eye piece, wtrpf Spotting Scope $218.00 Spotting scope users demand top-quality optics that perform flawlessly under all weather conditions. Enter the Alpen 15-45×60 model, a waterproof, fogproof spotting scope that’s ideal for backcountry use, benchrest shooting, or just checking out the scenery from your backyard. The scope is equipped with BaK-4 multicoated optics, which offer superior brightness, resolution, and edge clarity regardl… |
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Magnetic Ball Marker Necklace w/ A Woman’s Place & Snowflake ballmarkers Accented with Swarovski Crystals $28.95 This unique necklace offers you a chance to blend your outfits with your golf lifestyle. Mix and match your ball markers with your daily outfits to show off your sassy style. Mark your spot in style and make all your friends jealous when you wear this functional piece of jewelry…. |
